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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46207
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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Undoubtly,education occupies an extremely important part in reality.Even it will be associated directly with your work to some degree.According to recent statistics,the level of your education determined your work and salary.In all,under the stress of employment,someone who holds the doctoral degree has natural advantages comparing with other college or high school graduates.In view of wages,it is nearly as much as three times gap between high educated people and low educated people.Therefore,we can safely draw a conclusion that we must pay more government expenditure to our country education so as to reduce the unemployment rates and national economy.

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