2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to go to my hometown my dear friend. Today,i will introduce it to you. First,this is a beautiful place,the name is Beijing. This is a capital of the China.Now,this international city become more and more populary.The Great Wall,and Beihai Park are beautiful place.The Great wall is a symbol of China.