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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,internet become important in daily life for human.More and more people communicate through the internet,and the internet also help human a lot. Company use internet for their business, government use internet manage the documents or something else,ordinary being use internet keep in touch with each other.The internet almost in everywhere. Even some people think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. I don't think so. Because internet is just chat tool, it can't instead face-to-face contact. From face-to-face, you can feel the emotion,you can touch,you can know someone well face-to-face. Behind internet, you may hide the real yourself, you may become too lazy to visit your friends or your relatives.So, you have to more communicate with people in person if you want have a health social contact. Remember, internet is just tool,it is not your whole life. If not, you may become the son in the picture above,you parents cannot but contact with you online even you just live on upstairs.

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