2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

Ten year ago, a few people use mobile phone. The people use mobile phone to call or send message. Nowadays, mobile phone changed people's life style. The people use phone communication,also transfer accounts, take taxi,take pictures,pay bill and so on. You almost can survival with mobile phone only. That is why people formed the habit of dependence mobile phone so that overusing it. Look at that picture, people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. It is not exaggeration, there are a lot news report people was dead or get hurt from traffic Accident when they were crossing the street looking at their cell phone. Also people would like play cell phone when they are in the party, everybody just play cell phone instead communicate. I think people have to control themselves to use cell phone, don't let cell phone control your whole life.