小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可增加文中从句的使用量；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了。

In my desk have a photograph about my family,see the tall man,he is my father ,he is a freelancer,who close to the man is my mother,she is a worker,and this old woman is my grandmother,because she is so old,so she did't has work,she always do the homework when she has free time,she is a studious woman. and the little boy is my brother,he is a student of grade three.and look at the last of the two girls,the gray girl is my sister,she is a student too. now she is a high school student.and the black girl is me,i'm a Taobao artists in shenzhen.we are happy family