文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;能够简单运用一些从句;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
Dear John Thank you for inviting me to you home to have dinner together , i would love to go,But i can not, Because i am busy preparing an important exam after tomorrow , i really want to go ,but i have no time. i have a good idea how about next time ,we eat tegother again,what do you think of it? i hope you have a good time with your family Li Hua