托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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In contemporary society, during the process we doing things, perseverance can always make us full of strength and gives us motivation to carry on. However, the statement which the topic showed does not have no sense on all the aspect. Whether perseverance can make people stronger depend on which way they go. Admittedly, when we are doing something to overwhelm, the perseverance can actually give us faith and encourage or push us go on. As a result of this kind of holding on can surely benefit oneself. To illustrate, once, in order to improve my math grades, I intended to get through with a math textbook which almost as thick as a dictionary in one week. Thus, I certainly had to have lots of work to be done. On the past two days, I was so full of enthusiasm about all the complex math problems, and slept much less than before. However, on third days I started loafing on my job. But as soon as I was thinking about my proud math grades, I fight against with the laziness and keep working till midnight. My score on math is further higher than any other in my class as expected. And this lively example can show what perseverance brings to me is stronger. However, if the man you choose extend to bad behaviors, the merit of perseverance will turn to the vital demerit. For instance, Jack, a friend of my father, who has become a heavily smoked since he was a teenager. He smokes every time and about 20 cigarettes. From the day, he started smoking my father begins to persuade him to give up smoking which is not good for his health. However, Jack is a stubborn man. He thought it's comfortable to smoke and he carried on. As a consequence of the perseverance smoking like that for 30 years, Jack finally got the lung cancer. And what this kind of perseverance brings to us is only the vital harm and weakness. In conclusion, I am not supporting the opinion mentioned in the statement 100 percent but partly. In my point of view, perseverance cannot only sometimes make people stronger but also can make people weakness, and this all depends on which way they choose to carry on.