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i am very happy because this exam i feel so easy. dear fred i glad share this with you.first of all after the exam i will go to play football with my firend. next i will have a good a sleep because this exam make i very tired. then i going to play basketball with my classmate. but i play football better than play basketball. and this no problem because i like play basketball after this i wil go to bookstore buy my like books. i will have a good time after the exam.this my plan.i want to know you plan.
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