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I am very happy because this exam I feel so easy. Dear fred I glad share this with you.First of all after the exam I will go to play football with my firend. Next I will have a good a sleep because this exam make I very tired. then I going to play basketball with my classmate. But I play football better than play basketball. And this no problem because I like play basketball after this I wil go to bookstore buy my like books. I will have a good time after the exam.That my plan.I want to know your plan.
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