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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I am very happy because this exam I feel very esay. I glad share this with you.First of all after the exam I will go to play football with my firend. Next I will have a good a sleep because this exam make I very tired. then I going to play basketball with my classmate. But I play football better than play basketball. And this no problem because I enjoy playing basketball after this I am going to buy I like books in the bookstore. I will have a good time after the exam.Above is my plan.I want to know your plan. Yours, David
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