2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

With the development of our society,computer is becoming more and more close to our daily life.Not only does it bring significant benefits,but also it brings many terrible problems. In a one hand,we are linked by computers which can make the world become smaller and more convenient.We can stay in our home without going out but getting know the things which happend all over the world.What's more,we can study on our computers,for there being rich information.And we can make many friends who come from many different countries. But on the other hand,we may lost in the large net.Many teenagers are so indulged in computer games.And so many people lost themselves for the different kinds of information.We can't clearly identify what information is good or bad.We just lost. All in all,computer is a double-edged sword.If we use it in the right way,they will bring us benefits.If not,we will lost ourselves.