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I am very glad to take my foreign friend to visit my hometown . However ,the most interesting place place in my mind is the Changzhou Dinanous Park. I am very pleasant to take him there ,because it is really wonderful,which is poppular among young people. Firstly ,it is a beautiful park that is surrounded by many trees and flowers. Its decorations are very equipe . And in it, it has many interesting and exciting ways to play ,which make you feel wonderful.
