Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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A survey shows that in 2011, if a person get high degree, he would had high weekly earnings and low umemployment published recently from Bureau of Labor Statistics,Current Population Survey,the data of which are for persons age 25 and over,besides,earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers. this result is reasonable,because people who has high degree spend more time on studying new knowledge and technic,so generally,they are more valueable.and a people`s earnings depends on his values.in every country,young people study very hard to get high degree,in order to get a good job and good earnings.they are hard to be fired. then ,i can see that if you want a good weekly earnings ,getting a high degree is a good idea.