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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Today is sunday,The weather is very cold.I don't like winter,because my leg is very ache when the winter come in.I wear a lot of clothes to pretect my leg.whhen the weather is better,I out of the home to walk,I usually walk one hour,It is help me to relax and practice body,I had readed the article that descript if you walk one hour every day,You can more live four-five years than other peoper.It is a amaze,so I will keep this good habit.
