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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12895
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇表达不够丰富,但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

At present, the Intenet has a more and more important impact on our daily life. And people can not leave the Internet any more. Compared to the traditional communication way,face-to-face contact,the Intenet give an edge on that we can communicate with others wherever we are. Nowadays, the whole world has been covered with the Internet which is convenient to our life. On the contrary, we need face to face if we use face-to-face contact. The Inernet also provides us with a chance that we can output more information in one time. After all,the words and time are limited if we use the face-to-face talk. Whatever the present circumanstances are, I insist that the face-to-face contact will not be replaced by the electronic communication. The advantage which the face-to-face contact has is making people closed, which is the weakness of the electronic communication.

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