托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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We are reliable on social media on web nowadays such as weibo, wechat and so on, which lead to snap judgments on a short comment writen by others we are actually not aquaintant with. And these is the commonplace phenomenon on morden society with development of technology and many people are persuaded by their snap judgments according to others comment without the comprehensive logical detectation. As for me i can't believe on snap judgments. There are many misleading information on the internet such as the healthy tips, the secrets about success and so on, which although simplely writes proposals without the demonstration for why it's useful or harmless, many people are willing to believe it for the reason that i tried and there are some return at least. In fact, this tips are alway harmful and damage their health. And moreover, they will develop a inertia habit that are unwilling to fingure out the logical reason benearth the reality and just do what others do which are probably not fit on them. Furthermore, there would be more chaos and rebels emerging if we had faith in our snap judgements. fake news on weibo, for instance, reported that tourists entered into our country and prepared to have a massacre on the crowd of high density, posed a treat on us and then many people might be depressed and started to commiting crimes from then on. Actually they will arrested by polices for what they do due to their wrong judgements in the end, which could be adverted if they thought it over. On conclusion, as a coin has two sides, making a judgement just by institutions has an inverse impact on our life and is a obstacle on the way to unveil the truth.