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作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
A Meaningful Life As the sayig goes:" The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". actually, it goes without saying that the value of life lies in the way you make use of it. Say, regard the learning as a lifelong career. Through learning, one can gain a rich range of knowledge and skills, which enhances his spiritual world, promotes his's all-round development, and improves the quality of his life. Anther case in point is to endeavor to fulfill your dream. As is water to fish, so is dream to man. Only when you take the time to pursue it, can you be well aware of who you are and what kind of life you are seeking for. last but not least, be committed to building up your body, loving your friends and family. no one can deny the fact that it's the strong body that maintain a healthy life, likewise, it's the company of family and friends that makes life full of warmth. Personally, life needs these things to be truly meanful: something to do, something to hope for and someone to love.
