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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

I think it's not that bad to make friends on line.But of course,we must be very careful not to believe everything. Parents and teachers are always worried about what kind of friends their children and students are making. When we are little we learn never to take candy from strangers, and now that we are in a technological world, we are told to distrust people we meet online. After barrels of warnings thrown at you, when someone talk to you online your first thought is what does this person want from me. I think that's the saddest thing. Since when do we distrust people so much? Sure there are scammer and other "bad people" out there, but not everyone's bad. Having online friends could open your eyes to new worlds and discuss on topics freely, talking to people from all over the world, learning new things and exchange ideas. Of course, it's not good to spend too much time online and ignore everything else, reality is as important as cyberspace, but it's still good to have some online friends who you can tell things to without them knowing who you are, and they can help you out with your problems, it avoids embarrassment and would make you feel better. Do keep in mind that you do not tell your on line friends the information that will probably do harm to you.

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