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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, our soical is trend to "appearancism". It means that many people want to make friends with beautiful guys instead of a person with a unromantic face. I don't think that is a good idea.In my opinion, the beautiful men may not have the heart as kind as the appearance, I really desire to have a talk and get lost in it with the person who control a perfect thinking without good look. Many company choice the staff frirstly check the face looking. The good face is the passport to the company. However, how many excellent worker will lost in this way? They don't have a excellent looking so they must be good at study, Finally they still lose the qualification to get into the company. There is a topping example to expound my words. He called Ma Yun who is the originator of Alibaba and Alipay. He is a thin and short. But these element can not prevent him from discovering the online shopping. Not anyone appreciate his work but he wiliing to adventure. Dose he had a good looking? NO! He have the real talent! The talent is more important than appearance. If we hard working in the area we are working, we will be the winner of life.

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