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Online shopping is becoming more and more popular now. Adults and teenagers like buying clothes, snacks and cosmrtics on the Internet. Children enjoy pruchasing joys online. Now some people help other strangers to buy the products which aren't sell in China from other countries. There are many advantages of online shopping like it convenient for staying at home. However, is the online shopping as good as the description? Many people said that they have bought the fake or unquelified products. The seller online can see our purchase recording through the date, they can know what we have bought and how much was it. Then they decide to post you which level of fake products. Another fraud is that thay sell expensive drug or health care products to people which is most consisted by elder. The good situation is the drug don't have the side effect, but the bad situation may send people to the hospital even the heaven. So when we want to buy something online please consider the credit of seller and make our eyes bright.
