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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨。
Online shopping is becoming more and more popular now. Adults and teenagers like buying clothes, snacks and cosmetics on the Internet. Children enjoy buying joys online. Now some people help other strangers to buy the products which are not sell in China from other countries. There are many advantages of online shopping like it convenient for staying at home. However, is the online shopping as good as the description? Many people said that they have bought the fake or not quelified products. The seller online can see our recording pf purchase through the date, they can know what we have bought and how much was it. Then they decide to post you which level of fake products. Another fraud is that they sell expensive drug or health care products to people which is most consist by elder. The good situation is the drug don't have the side effect, but the bad situation may send people to the hospital even the heaven. So when we want to buy something online please consider the credit of seller and make our eyes bright.
