2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Will phones kill letter writing? Phones are the new way to keep in touch which is more convenient and faster than write letters. But some say that phones will kill the letter writing. I against it. Writting a letter is a comfortable way to express the emotions which phones can not achieve. The phone is helpful in many ways like noticing the information and else. But it is the fsatest way to take mistake. For example, when we are angry, we can give a phone call to that people. When we are chatting we someone with vague message, that is easy to make others feel uncomfortable. In the past, everything is slow. The traffic is solw, post a letter is slow. That make we loved one person in our whole life. We could expressed our feeling through the significants words and sentences. We could consider our dictions in the letters. We could make the languages more sentient. There are many benefits which the phone calls can never touch. Phones will never kill letter writting.