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Nowadays,can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely we can not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of the cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Online shopping is welcomed by most people.Their various reasons is as follows. For the perspective of consumer,it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time just by clicking the mouse and they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers,not only can it cut some costs for those who don't have many savings,but also they don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade. However,there are still some defects in online shopping.It is face to face deals that makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy, as a result of which people will lose the patience to bargainning.Therefore,we have to weigh pros and cons when shopping online. It is undeniable that shopping online has become an irresistible trend in modern society,which is of great urgency that we need to regulate its laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.
