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Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? Nowadays, the debate about whether the private car wners should be taxed for pollution takes pablic attention. College as I am, the opinion I hold, who not have a personal car,I think that there is need to take taxing fee for pollution from private car owners, when I have my own car, fallowing what I say today. So many cars in our city that the air pollution becomes more and more serious. Ten years ago, when I hold an ice cream in my hand, happy, in summer on the way back home, sharing with my paternals. Now, I am not a child, but I also lose the chance to share my ice cream whith my friends, dirty air making everyone become more personal. The relationship is becoming less and less unfamiliar due to these little things. So many cars on the road that traffic jams takes place more frequently. when I was a child, we went to school on foot, and even buses are very rare. It was uneasy to be get into traffic acccidents, but nowadays, we are often heard that how many peole have dead in trushing. The city transport is become more and more bad. Our lives get much better than before, however, the new problems show up, just like too many private cars. I think the way taking tax from private car owners could reduce the trouble.
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