2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Will phones kill letter writing? Phones are the new way to keep in touch which is more convenient and faster than write letters. But some say that phones will kill the letter writing. I am on the opposite. Writing a letter is a comfortable way to express the emotions which phones can not reach. The phone is useful in many ways like noticing the information and else. On the contrary, it is the fastest way to take mistake. For example, when we are angry, we can give a phone call to that people. When we are chatting we someone with vague message, that is easy to make others feel uncomfortable. In the past, everything is slow. The traffic is slow, posting a letter is slow. That made we loved one person in our whole life. We could express our feeling through the significants words and sentences. We could consider our diction in the letters. We could make the languages more sentient. There are many benefits which the phone calls can never touch. Phones will never kill letter writing. Phones are short of emotion lingering charm.