小学二年级英语作文:My pet

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I have a dog which follows me for five years.The dog is one of best friends of those people who loves pets best.Because of this dog,I don't like cats anymore.Ever since I had a pet,I have had much happier life than before.After having dinner,I always go for a walk with him to a park which is a famous spot noticed by a beautiful dog.He likes eating some kinds of food.Once he ate a great number of vegetables and on another occasion,he drank some bottles of orange,so he is much too fatter now.