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Many people are attracted by foreign festival because of its special charm.I am one of them who are attracted by festivals.So,i think it is a good thing for our life. First,mang people are busy with working for their life and future.They are so tired that they need to take a rest.That is why they celebrate foreign festivals such as Christmas.Throught those activities of the festivals,people will get warm and happiness. Another important reason is that celebrating foreign festivals helps stimulate economic growth and learn foreign history.Besides,with the development of science and technology,the earth has become a global village.Those festivals can exchange eastern and western cultures. In brief,celebrating foreign festivals is a good thing.But we can not be crazy about it.We spend foreign festivals to have fun.If we forget our own festivals in order to celebrate foreign festivals,we will lose out nature.
