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My hometown is Guangyuan which is in the north of sichuan province. And my hometown is the birth place of the first women king in the China.Our city has too many taste food. If you go to there, you will have a good eating vacation .What"s more ,my hometown has a long history .We has a lot of historica palaces all around in this city .Every year there are too many pepople come to visit including foreigners .If you want to know more chinese culture you should come to there .Then our pepople are very friendly. We all hope diffrent costumes coming to our city.Last but ont least , our city has good weather in every seaon.It is good for diffrent pepole to visit this city .You can choose any time to come our city .Our city will give you too much surprises.
