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My name is Liming,a twenty year's old boy,graduate from XX university,I'd like to apply for the position of English translater volunteer for Olympic Games.As a college student,I have a good command of English,spoken English is very good.I love sports,basketball and football is my favorite,beside,I have a habbit of running at night.What's more,I am ready to help others,my mom told me to be kind with people when I am young.So I have a keen interest in helping others,I'd like to contribute to helping.It will be much appreciated for your consideration.