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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
From the picture,we can draw a conclusion that communicate on the internet is a common phenomenon in the present.I think the impactof the internet on the way people communicate is that more and more people don't want communicate face-to-face ,because they think communicate with others on the internet more easy and convience. However, I still believe electronic communication won't replace face-to-face contact.Because I think some feeling and thoughts can't be expressed by writing words and said words,it need body language to express.such as :if you very sad, because you didn't pass the exam.At this time, I think you need someone communicate with you face-to-face rather than talk with you on the internet. In nowaday's society,eletronic communication become more and more popular,but face-to-face contact is very improtant too.
