雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Never been so many people to travel to alie country nowdays.it is reported that go up 20% last year for chinese to travel to other country ,and the number will go up in the future. it is positive or negative effect for the country or society?I think anything have two sides.but the positive is more than negative . First of all,it is positive things.when people go out to other country for travel,they have chance to touch close that country and the culture ,the local food and the local people,they can learn some different art from different culture ,that widen their eyes range and let them love their mother country more than before.they also learn the other country how to live their bad life and they will feel happy fjor they live in a rich country.for this point that is positive . On the other hand,may some people foung they dont have a good life than the other country that let they dont like to live in their country ,some people may do something bad in other country that illegal ,that will let the country shamed for their doing. such as some chinese went out to other country ,they throw away waste anywhere .some like to makerd their name on the secen place ,that isnot a good things for the china and lost chinese face .that let other country people think chinese all like that .that is negative things.but afterall that is a small part people. Anyway, I think go out to travel to other country ,that is posive than negative effect for the people or the country.