小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章衔接手法恰当；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

I always see a better myself in my dream, which should be what I hope to be. Slim figure, beautiful hair, and fashionable wearings are all access to me. And I am a capable manager in some a line who can operate both production and business smartly all the time. The most important is that a very warm family behind me, gives the extremely valuable feeling of love.