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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

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is it wise to make friends online In ancient time ,there is no electricity and the only way of communication is writing letters .But because of the traffic inconvenience,people have to think about another way to communicate with each other.Luckily,followed by the arrival of the information age,the way of communication is become more and more variety and convenience,for example, in this century, qq,mobile phone ,wechat facebook were chosen by more and more people .Therefore,letter communication gradually being replaced by the other way of communication. Although letter communication is gradually forgotten,the strength which we can not deny.compared with modern way of communication ,writing letters can show their sincere feelings and good handwriting.Apart from,the recipients would be very happy when them saw the handwriting letters.Because they though they were treated by wholehearted.What is more,in poetry letters have become a symbol of the feeling of miss hometown or friends. In a sense,writing letters are the original way of communication.As a result ,there is no doubt that letter communication can not be entirely replaced. The world is developed so quickly and people are living in a fast-paced society,it’s quite obvious that letter communication is not appropriate way of communication.At first,the modern way of communication is much quick and convenience,such as the mobile phone user can get massage by sending short massage or ringing others in a few seconds. The second,the modern way of communication is much variety than letter communication,for example, using qq not only can we exchange information,but,we can communicate with each other via video frequency.Last but not least,the modern way of communication more suitable for the fast-paced society than letter communication. As the old saying goes,the survival of the fittest is unwell is eliminated.Lettering communication is not the best way of communication any more.It is no wondered that lettering communication is less and less.

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