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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Working part time It is not an uncommon occurrence that ever since students were eighteen and have more spare time,they would rather do part time job than ask money from their parents. However everything has double vision,personally,I prefer working part time is good for our life. To begin with,doing part time job can make friends and learn how to get along with others. While we were working in part time,we can meet different people who might have common interests with us,so we can make friends with them. Besides,we have to face different people and try to get along with them. It might be the first step for us to enter the society. Otherwise,students can make money by working part time. For example,the president of super curriculum,Yu Jiawen,when he was a senior high school student,he makes money by programming and in this way he earned two million yuan,and then he started his company super curriculum. Nowadays his company's software is used by most universities and he is famous for his company. In addition,working part time can broaden students' horizon. As the old saying goes,man who travels far knows more. Doing part time job can give students more chance to travel in different places and see things in different angles. What's more,part time job can rich students' social experience. In a word,working part time not only developed our abilities but also increased our social experience.
