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The Value of University Life Becoming college students,many think of freedom,colorful activities and campus love,I am not such a romantic. To me,becoming a university student means,first of all,time management. Before coming to university,my life is filled with practice paper or has a course. However,when I became a college student,which I can find is that in my spare time was occupied by varieties way of entertainment. There is no surprise that my playing came between me and my studies,and my grades went down. As time goes by,my first semester at college was passed by,which has been left was a very low score in my score paper. Only in this way I found that if I were worked hard,I would not be so ashamed of myself and so guilty to my parents. From then on,did I realize that how important for me to make a schedule to manage my free time. In addition,I am worked much harder than before,apart from that I have learned to plan my time efficiently all by myself. That is,which I limit my entertainment time so that I can spend more my time on studying. Owing to following my time schedule strictly,which is an inevitable result of my life get rid of the state of chaos and becomes more interested in study. That is that time management is an important part of which I learned in university life.
