2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

What’s my mother teaches me When I was a little girl,my mother wants to plant some peanuts and she told me to help her. I did as she said. Meanwhile,she said look at those peanuts you plant today,if you take good care of it,several months later you will have more than twice peanuts. Whatever you want you should treat it as a seed,planting it,taking care of it and making more efforts,at last,you will find it's worth doing and reap what you want. Otherwise you will find nothing can be given without pay. I cannot understand her mean but I followed her advice during that time,and after a while I knew how significant those words in my life. When I become a middle school student,I was still a naughty girl.But an occasional thing is changed my life.One day in the school,I play with my classmates and we have dropped the glasses of the window by chance.my teacher told my mother and my mother have a word with my,she said that if I have considered that someone pass the build when the glasses is dropping,whatever you do you should responsible for your behavior and this time you should do more housework as a pay.This thing helps me to become a responsible girl which my mother expected. This is just a part which my mother has taught me,but it helps me more.Although my mother is an ordinary women and even not goes to high school,she taught me her life experience by an easy way,which always reminds me to be a good person as my mother expected.