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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6017
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用量稍显不足;文中高级词汇不足。

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Learning is an interesting thing at school.I have already left school for nine years old and I still want to come back as well.People are not so honest as they once were,because they don't like to believe in anyone anymore as a child.When I was ten-year-old,however,I was curious about a great number of amused things I had ever met. Because of this,I always was hurt and I got a very low mark frenquently,so I hated math very much,but English was my favourite subject actually.My school I studies was smaller than others.There were not more than twenty teachers,at that time,students made good friends with teachers.Our school had a playground which is coverd with some grass now.There are many new modern buildings next to the school.Even if I have left,but I still love it all the time.It has never changed.

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