语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;从句使用量稍显不足。
Learning is an interesting thing at school.I have already left school for nine years old and I still want to come back as well.People are not so honest as they once were,because they don't like to believe in anyone anymore as a child.When I was ten-year-old,however,I was curious about a great number of things I had ever met. Because of this,I always was hurt and I got a very low mark frequently,so I hated math very much,but English was my favourite subject actually.My school I studies was smaller than others.There were not more than twenty teachers,at that time,students made good friends with teachers.Our school had a playground which is coverd with some grass now.There are many new modern buildings next to the school.Even if I have left,but I still love it all the time.It has never changed.