采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好。
Learning is an interesting thing at school.I have already left school for nine years old and I still want to come back as well.People are not so honest as they once were,because they don't like to believe in anyone anymore as a child.When I was ten-year-old,however,I was curious about a great number of things I had ever met. I always was hurt and I got a very low mark frequently,so I hated math very much,but English was my favourite subject actually.The school to study was smaller than others.There were not more than twenty teachers,at that time,students made good friends with teachers.Our school had a playground which is covered with some grass now.There are many new modern buildings next to the school.Even if I have left,but I still love it all the time.It has never changed.