2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is in guizhou province, there has a famous waterfall named huangguoshu waterfall, if I have a friend want to go to visit my hometown, I think i will take him or her to there, huangguoshu waterfall is the third greatest waterfall in the world and it's the greatest waterfall in China, if you go there ,you can see the water fall of the climb, it's a great view, and if you are lucky enough, you can see a rainbow over the waterfall, besaids, you can see the buyi nationality, they live there for centries