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In my opinion, I think as students we are careful with our money is moral excellence. Most of us are studying in college and we are supported by our parents, so it is our duty to save money in our daily life. For myself, I also careful with my money. Last weekenday, I wanted to watch movie with my friends, but it is too expensivefor us if we went to the cinema directly to buy movie ticket. In order to save money, we book the tickets on the internet advance.However, I have some friends who have not consciousness about save money, so they always run out of their money when they just receive money from they parents. As a result, they have to ask their parents to give them money again or borrow money from their friends. That's so terrible. Concluding, I think we should study how to save money and have good plan with our money. Our parents always worry about us to live and they also tired of making money, we save money is our duty.
