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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In my opinion, I think as students we are careful with our money are moral excellence. Most of us are studying in college and we are supported by our parents, so it is our duty to save money in our daily life. For myself, I also careful with my money. Last weekend, I wanted to watch movie with my friends, but it is too expensive for us if we went to the cinema to buy movie ticket directly. In order to save money, we booked the tickets on the internet advance. However, I have some friends who have not money-consciousness, so they always run out of their money when they just receive money from they parents. As a result, they have to ask their parents to give them money again and again or borrow money from their friends. That's so terrible. Concluding, I think we should study how to save money and have good plan with our money. Our parents always worry about us to live and they also tired of making money, we save money is our duty.
