小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章衔接手法恰当；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；采用了一些简单的从句。

my best friend is a smart and beautiful girl. ton is her name and she is 20 years old,she like to enjoy something that can make her become more strength.she is my best friend bucause we have the same habits,and we all like to eat.In owe opinion, eat is the best thing in life.