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单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
As is known to all,China has a lot of cities.But if my foreign friend comes to China,i will take him to my own city which i think is the most beautiful city in China.My hometown is in the northeast of my hometown called Fuzhou. Fuzhou has so many interesting place,but the most popular is Sangfangqixiang. It has so many house which is the famous people live in.
