小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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All children want to be grown up.They are curious about this world,it's the reason why they would like to think of it.When we were a child,however,a large number of homework used to be done.Including the weekends,the children didn't have any free time to play games,so I asked a boy what he would do in the future and he told me that he didn't want to do homework anymore.If he grows up,he will have a plenty of time to travel.As you know,both adult and children are more and more busier than before.Many people thing that life is a competition in the social,we must take part in it.When they all grew up,the pleasent days in the past would be missed,but it has never come back again.As a child,parents gave you some money and you could use it to buy something what you want to.When you became a adult,you must earn money at work and you had to solve prombles by youself.At the same time,you need to take care of your parents even if you had had trouble in you life and work.