2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Glad to learn that you are going to Dongguan city,as a person who has been live in dongguan many years,I'd like to introduce the interesting places of dongguan for you. The first place is Haizhan Museum,it is the place that shows China people boycotted opium.You can see many pictures and cultural relic on the museum,and feel the srong,brave when faced the opium,and they saved China by their courage. The second place is Daling mountain,when you stand on the mountain top,you can see the whole city,and the scenery is very beautiful.Furthermore,you can doing exercise when climb the mountain. The final place is shopping street,there are many brand shops in the street,you can buy every things you want on the street.Beside,near the street,there are many snacks,such as hotpot,barbecue,fried rice.What's more,there is still bar that I think you will like it. Wish you have a good time in dongguan.