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高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:08浏览次数:6603
要求:
文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要,因此提高国民修养势在必行。近日,你班就本话题进行了热烈讨论,请据以下要点给某英文报写一篇120字左右的短文,表明个人观点。
1. 提高国民素质的必要性;  
2. 列举你所观察到的一些不文明行为(两种以上); 
3. 就此做出评论,并提出建议。  
参考词汇:behave  v 举止、行为、表现  spit  vi 吐痰    
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

It is well-acknowledged that good manners plays an important role in the international communication. However, there is an intense discussion about how to improve national behaviors and cultivate people's sense of manners. As far as I am concerned, it is urgent for every citizen to realize the importance of good manners and constrain their personal behaviors which represent their self-cultivation. However, there are some uncivilized behaviors that can be spotted around China. For example, some people would spit in public with no sense of shame. Another unpleasant behavior is that people always make much noise in public like in cinemas and libraries. SO, what should we do facing in such a serious condition? First, I strongly believe that our government has to take some measures to tackle it, such as increasing public promotion and add more financial revenue to education. Second, enterprises and news media should shoulder the responsibility to promote positive news. At last, it is everybody that influences the whole culture as well as getting rid of bad behaviors. To sum up, never hesitate to move up. Every little helps. Just start small and be a better man!

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