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My hometown Harbin,a city known for its ice and snow,is honored as Eastern Paris.Also,its Russian-style buildings and delicious foods are really attractive and inviting.And I would like to tell you that it is a fortune to visit it. Initially,Harbin is a nice summer resort.Not only the temperature is much lower than the southern cities',but also the local ice-cream is wonderful or even unforgettable. Additionally, the Central Street is the best place you can not miss.Appreciating the various styles of buildings and enjoying the food and pretty handicrafts are good choices.Nevertheless,when it comes to the winter in Harbin,it is another scenery.We have snow sculpture exhibition annually and use ice lanterns to decorate the streets. Isn't it amazing? I invent you all to have a visit to Harbin sincerely,you will never regret.
