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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9800
要求:
题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

作者高级词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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What his studies are to explore the innovation of the forms of Tom Jones, and ensure the historic position of the structure of novels written by Fielding, however, he ignores the nature or the main purpose of the fictions. What his studies is to explore the innovation of the forms of Tom Jones, and ensure the historic position of the structure of novels written by Fielding, however, he ignores the nature or the main purpose of the fictions. What his study is to explore the innovation of the forms of Tom Jones, and ensure the historic position of the structure of novels written by Fielding, however, he ignores the nature or the main purpose of the fictions.

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