高级词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;熟练使用了一些长难句。
Yu (2003) begins to study the identity of Tom, from the identity of Tom, he ensures that the good or evil was not depended on the identity, and the true love was not rely upon what class you lived. In addition, the subjects which she researched just concern the major characters. She is lack to study the common people in low class, which made her evidence was not persuaded.